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REFLECTIONS AT THIRTY-YEARS-YOUNG

Part IV

Written by Diane N. Tran


Never compare yourself to others, it leads to vanity and bitterness for there are always those whom are greater and lesser than yourself.  Appreciate yourself as you are, no matter how humble you think you may be or how others may perceive you to be.

It takes years to build up trust and only seconds to destroy it.  But don't judge people on who they used to be.  Allow them to be who they are.  See them how they are now, not how they were back then.

Decide whether you're willing to say no when you don't want to do something.  Decide whether you're willing to say yes when you do want something, even if everyone around you disagrees.  Decide whether you wish to live the life as you so desire, or whether you wish others to live your life for you.  Decide whether you want to be liked or admired, whether fitting in, is more important than finding out what you're doing here.
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"Reflections at Thirty-Years-Young" is a series of little life lessons I've learned in my thirty years of living life as just myself, just the way life happened to take me, whether good or bad. They can sweet, silly, pathetic, deep, touching, personal, or whatever adjective you care to use, but they are truths I live by and will continue living by and I bring them to you — and I hope you find some truth in them, too.

Reflections at Thirty-Years-Young © Diane N. Tran
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Thank you for these. I feel a lot of " :nod: " reading all of it. I have an inclination to trust these words, perhaps it's a little wishful to hope for absolutes, when I am simply turning 31 next week. I just feel really wonderful that you posted these. :love:
You are mysterious with Or without trying to be. I value mystery, but have to kind of guess to keep a person's attention sometimes, and this leads me to value the journey, the aspects of life which are here and now helpful or treacherous and the way we can improve it. This is uplifting, thank you :)
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*tranimation-art May 17, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Awww, thank you. I honestly didn't think anyone read these. They were more for myself than for others. I glad someone found it uplifting. I have a few more entries to add and I hope those help, too.
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~PadriacRatigan Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:nod: So very, very true.
Sometimes I wish lessons like this were easier to learn, but it always takes something pretty bad to learn anything good, or at least that's how it seems to work for me.
But again very true, and lesson learned eventually

I still stink at critiques, but I notice a typo; "But don't judge people on who they used to bme."
Also "Decide whether to say no when you don't want to do something. Decide whether to say yes when you do want something" seems off to me. I know the 'whether' doesn't work here as is, it's making it hard to get what you're going for on the first read through. You sort of 'catch' on it as you're reading, for lack of a better description.
Instinctively I'd change both to 'when'; but I think you want to keep the whether, as it's in all of the sentences here. Hmm, maybe something like;
"Decide whether you're willing to say no when you don't want to do something. Decide whether* you can/should say yes when you want something, even if those around you disagree"
So it's more obviously a choice thing, if that makes sense? I'm just not entirely sure how to word it and keep the flow of your repetition, if that makes sense?

*you could actually leave this out, but again I think you're going for a feel here.
I'd do something to the effect of "Decide whether you're willing to say no when you don't want to do something, to say yes when you do; even if those around you disagree" but it looses your repetition theme :hmm:

Sorry, I have a headache so my attempt at explanation is probably out the window :facepalm: If that's completely incoherent tell me and I'll try to word it better, really sorry
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*tranimation-art Apr 29, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Edited. I hope that makes more sense now. Thanks for catching it. It does sound a lot better now. :huggle:
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~PadriacRatigan May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad I could help a little :huggle:
And again, wonderful morals here :thumbsup:
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